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Black and Blue

Urban asphalt trail becomes home's huck-pickin' slope. Blackberries are ripe!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 11/9/2011 10:52:00 PM
We have a nature path ,, filled black and but the black is the birds eating the black berries...well blue berries... great poem,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Susan Buchel
Date: 11/10/2011 7:54:00 AM
Thanks, pd, for digging way back and finding my little poem-ette! Your stuff is so awesome, I often am unable to even say anything! Sort of like - "What could I possibly say to that!"
Date: 9/17/2011 3:11:00 PM
Like this one! I suppose you live in the countryside? I live in the city but I have picked berries on trips to the country. Send me some blackberries! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:35:00 PM
HAIKU! That's a wonderful one!
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Date: 9/2/2011 7:30:00 PM
I love this! And to be honest Im not fond of haiku poetry but this is very nice.. and I love berries!
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Date: 8/31/2011 9:28:00 PM
Lovely haiku with apt images , Susan
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Susan Buchel
Date: 8/31/2011 10:05:00 PM
Thank you Dr. sir! From you it means much.