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Black

For life in my life I rebuff you; evil you are You are sinister – black is your emblem You are sadness; gloom is your offer You are undying... world's enemy With no invitation you come to who you will silently You are elephant, devourer of stream Of happiness; I need not your hand in my way Come ~ happiness, blissfulness and gleefulness I am here For contest: unbearable beauty in pick your colour. 5-11-2016

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Date: 4/17/2017 7:23:00 AM
Fabulous #7
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Date: 11/7/2016 5:28:00 AM
Fantastic my friend, A.M. A seven!
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Date: 11/7/2016 3:20:00 AM
excellent in feeling and description- loved it
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Date: 11/6/2016 1:38:00 PM
- Great described in your poem, Afolabi ! - Well done - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/5/2016 9:50:00 PM
Hmmmm I guess it's all in the way you look at it. I will have to post my poem called black and see what you think of it. Great job here. God Bless and good luck in th contest. JB
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Date: 11/5/2016 9:02:00 PM
Yes! Great portrayal of the color black. Good luck in the contest. Lainey
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Date: 11/5/2016 4:08:00 PM
A vivid lack of color and beauty, wonderfully described. Best wishes in the contest Afolabi...
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 11/5/2016 4:30:00 PM
thank you for the comment, i appreciate it.

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