Rama Balasubramanian Poet Rhyme

Bizzare

Sky had come to the ground
Everything meteor planets Moon cloud and star
Below found

Brimming with  joy
Went out for a ride in my car
Enjoy

No sun
Went near and far
Fun

Sky had come to the ground
Went out for a ride in my car
Fun


Date: 9/6/2020

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Sara Kendrick October 12, 2020 at 4:17 AM Interesting work. It seems that way some days here from the creek rise. Congrats. Sara Rama Balasubramanian October 13, 2020 at 4:57 AM Wow how wonderful that would be. Count your blessings. Thanks for the congregation and same to you in case you participated. Take care, warm regards Rama

Kim Rodrigues September 30, 2020 at 6:24 AM Would be a bizarre experience! Congratulations! Rama Balasubramanian October 1, 2020 at 11:09 AM Thanks and same to you. Warm regards, Rama

Linda Alice Fowler September 30, 2020 at 5:45 AM Fun ride Rama. Congrats on the win! Linda Rama Balasubramanian October 1, 2020 at 11:09 AM Thanks and same to you. Warm regards, Rama

Mohan Chutani September 30, 2020 at 3:58 AM Rama, thanx for participating. Flying car, real bizarre. fine placement in my contest. Congrats. Mohan. Rama Balasubramanian September 30, 2020 at 4:17 AM Thank. I really enjoy your contest. Take care. Warm regards Rama

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2020 at 3:25 PM yes, that is indeed bizarre. well done, my friend ! And thanks for the birthday message! Rama Balasubramanian September 6, 2020 at 7:46 PM You come and drop in a positive message. Appreciation from a great poet like you makes my day. Thanks for brightening my day. Take care. Warm regards, Rama