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Bizzare

Sky had come to the ground Everything meteor planets Moon cloud and star Below found Brimming with joy Went out for a ride in my car Enjoy No sun Went near and far Fun Sky had come to the ground Went out for a ride in my car Fun Date: 9/6/2020

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2020 4:17:00 AM

Interesting work. It seems that way some days here from the creek rise. Congrats. Sara

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/13/2020 4:57:00 AM

Wow how wonderful that would be. Count your blessings. Thanks for the congregation and same to you in case you participated. Take care, warm regards Rama

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/30/2020 6:24:00 AM

Would be a bizarre experience! Congratulations!

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/1/2020 11:09:00 AM

Thanks and same to you. Warm regards, Rama

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/30/2020 5:45:00 AM

Fun ride Rama. Congrats on the win! Linda

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/1/2020 11:09:00 AM

Thanks and same to you. Warm regards, Rama

Mohan Chutani

Date: 9/30/2020 3:58:00 AM

Rama, thanx for participating. Flying car, real bizarre. fine placement in my contest. Congrats. Mohan.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 9/30/2020 4:17:00 AM

Thank. I really enjoy your contest. Take care. Warm regards Rama

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2020 3:25:00 PM

yes, that is indeed bizarre. well done, my friend ! And thanks for the birthday message!

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 9/6/2020 7:46:00 PM

You come and drop in a positive message. Appreciation from a great poet like you makes my day. Thanks for brightening my day. Take care. Warm regards, Rama