Bizarre

Walking through streets, I saw A young boy tattooed, wearing jeans torn in places, Such chutzpah! Hair coloured blue, He was bald in between spaces, What hue! He smiled, Wearing braces Wild! Walking through streets, I saw, He was bald in between spaces, Wild! 09.25.2020 For Mohan Chutani's "Let's Minichu on Bizarre" contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2020 4:04:00 AM

Ha!! I wonder if he was young??? Congrats on your winning work. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/30/2020 9:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. I saw him in the store this week. Have a fun day with your win and writing away...............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/30/2020 9:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place win, Jo. This boy's appearance certainly was bizarre.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/30/2020 6:13:00 AM

LOL by the time you get to the end! Congratulations on first place! Loved the Chutzpah!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/30/2020 5:23:00 AM

Great job Jo. This brings to mind how wild some the statements were in by era:)) Congratulations on the win! Linda

Mohan Chutani

Date: 9/30/2020 4:26:00 AM

Jo, a fine Minichu on bizarre and how youngsters continue to awe us with things we never could imagine to do. thanx for participating. Top placement in my contest. Congrats. Mohan.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/25/2020 5:45:00 PM

very descriptive, jo... love how this flows!...huggs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/25/2020 5:22:00 AM

He certainly looks bizarre. Lovely poem. ~~