Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

Bizarre

Walking through streets, I saw 
A young boy tattooed, wearing jeans torn in places,
Such chutzpah! 

Hair coloured blue,
He was bald in between spaces,
What hue!

He smiled,
Wearing braces 
Wild!

Walking through streets, I saw,
He was bald in between spaces,
Wild!


09.25.2020


For Mohan Chutani's "Let's Minichu on Bizarre" contest

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Sara Kendrick October 12, 2020 at 4:04 AM Ha!! I wonder if he was young??? Congrats on your winning work. Sara

Paula Goldsmith September 30, 2020 at 9:47 AM Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. I saw him in the store this week. Have a fun day with your win and writing away...............

Sam Kauffman September 30, 2020 at 9:27 AM Congratulations on your first place win, Jo. This boy's appearance certainly was bizarre.

Kim Rodrigues September 30, 2020 at 6:13 AM LOL by the time you get to the end! Congratulations on first place! Loved the Chutzpah!

Linda Alice Fowler September 30, 2020 at 5:23 AM Great job Jo. This brings to mind how wild some the statements were in by era:)) Congratulations on the win! Linda

Mohan Chutani September 30, 2020 at 4:26 AM Jo, a fine Minichu on bizarre and how youngsters continue to awe us with things we never could imagine to do. thanx for participating. Top placement in my contest. Congrats. Mohan.

Nette Onclaud September 25, 2020 at 5:45 PM very descriptive, jo... love how this flows!...huggs

Victor Buhagiar September 25, 2020 at 5:22 AM He certainly looks bizarre. Lovely poem. ~~