Bitty Bird

Little wings, as if a bitty bird tries to fly away,
but I clutch this childish muse whose morphed teeny-tiny,
amused at how quickly time flies and how words escape me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Baker Avatar
August 26, 2025 at 4:20 PM
This may be the first Sijo poem I've ever seen, Kim. Cute short form. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2025 at 7:39 PM
Thank you, Bill! Perhaps you will try one.
Kerr Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 4:49 PM
Marvellous work. Deep and evocative reflection. Thank you Kim for spotting a mistake in my alliteration piece which I corrected.and your compliment Howard
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 6:36 PM
I am glad when someone points out my mistake. Hugs and thank you, Howard!
Canerdy Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 12:42 PM
This one resonates with me, Kim. Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 6:34 PM
Some times I have nothing! Hugs
Sidwell Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 11:37 AM
Oh, this is so clever and fun! I’m sure many can relate.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 12:11 PM
Thank you, Robert! :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 8:22 AM
Good word play, dear Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 12:09 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Hind Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 5:43 PM
This is heartwarming. However, you catch the muse of anything, lol. :D
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 1:26 PM
Can't that muse take a little trip without us going along. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 8:48 PM
So glad you enjoyed it!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 9:39 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Bitty Bird" write. Time sure does fly away. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.........
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 8:48 PM
Have a wonderful weekend, my friend!
Swan Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 6:40 AM
This is lovely. The sounds are so pretty and the sentiment so true. Who could catch this little bitty bird? -not no-one (to coin a double negative!). love it. J :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 7:18 AM
LOL…thank you! Hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 1:56 AM
... it happens often :) - Nice Sijo, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 7:16 AM
It sure does! Hugs and thank you!
Wolf Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 7:37 PM
Tinkerbell comes to mind for some reason...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 7:15 AM
LOL! Hugs
Rose  Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 7:12 PM
lol smile, it does pass by way too quickly when we are immersed in writing. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 7:40 AM
Your commenting has been turned off for awhile? Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 7:15 AM
Thank you, Rose :)
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