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Bittersweet Wine

I sip thoughts like wine to become intoxicated on you i raise my glass in toast to dreams with empty glass and empty arms I sip tears like wine

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Heidi Sands

Date: 11/1/2019 11:36:00 AM

Well done Sandra :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2019 11:48:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi :) hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/1/2019 10:09:00 AM

Nicely done, Sandra! Enjoyed.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2019 10:37:00 AM

Thank you Kim :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 11/1/2019 9:19:00 AM

Oh wow this was beautiful Sandy!;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/1/2019 4:47:00 PM

Simple never! Brilliant maybe!;) lol! Loved it!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2019 9:58:00 AM

Thank you Brenda, glad you liked my simple scribbles...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/1/2019 8:24:00 AM

Bittersweet indeed, Sandy! You captured the essence in your ending.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2019 9:57:00 AM

Thank you Vijay...just poetic scribbles...i don't like wine and don't really drink but maybe once a year.... hugs :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/1/2019 7:59:00 AM

This is poetry in the most lovely way.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2019 9:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Caren... it came out of nowhere :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 11/1/2019 7:01:00 AM

Sad but beautifully sad. They way you create and connect phrases, like an artist with a brush melting colors together to produce an amazing scene that leaves the reader breathless. Absolutely beautiful Sandy

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2019 9:56:00 AM

Thank you...i don't know where this came from on my bus this morning...i don't drink and really don't care for wine, but this came to me so i wrote it out...you are too kind my friend :) hugs