Bittersweet Wait

My Sunshine at the sight of your words
Your chance glance upon my words
A riotous burst of Sunflower seeds
Droplets at a thundering pace 
Rips away the cobwebs of silence
Sunset when I stare at empty space
Had I known this sweet bitter taste
Would have closed my heart in tearful haste
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ak Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 5:28 AM
Thanks to all for reading my poem and appreciating it. For an amateur like me, it means a lot.
Breidenthal Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 10:04 PM
Very nice verse. Adored it to the core. Love the simplicity with it. Excellent job & do pen on! -DWB a well-deserved 6 out of 7.
Schumacker Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 5:10 PM
Hi Keelu AK, You have a very interesting name by the way. This is a deliciously raw poem. I read it a few times. It has real substance. Keep up the great work. Have a great day. Earl
Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 6:11 AM
Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,
A   Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 8:27 AM
this is sweet at same time bitter, as in the title... enjoyed, Keelu, . , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
A  Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Like the ending... Keelu, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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