Bittersweet Solitude Part 2

I feel like my life is a clean slate
I feel you lingering in my thoughts...you stitched up my insecure frame of mind 

And stitched up the little pieces of memory that knits a smile on my face 

I don't know how to escape my poverty and unstable reality
I should've drove on another lane...now I'm far from home

But you cheer me up with your appealing effulgence 
You beam at me as if your the sun illuminating the sky...you amaze me with your brilliance 

My fears are ganging up on me
My tears are springing out of my blue-green eyes
Untangle me from my demise and help me reach prosperity
Take me away from my mystifying reality...

Sift out my remorse
Things are getting out of hand...
Out of course... I wish I could fight your wars for you
But you refused my helping hand
We should both go to the promiseland 
Please don't refuse this offer
Or I'll feel rejected for eternity
Stay with me forever until I die...we'll share our glory and we'll both take turns and write a fascinating story

Will there be an open door for me to step inside my dreamland?
Will it lead to His promise land?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/12/2013 11:21:00 PM
David...From reading your writes. You seem to be looking for to many answers? Whatever happened to you in the past is in the past. Let go of it... Live each day as a fresh new day. It may ease some of the pain. And keep writing! It helps to release...
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