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Bittersweet Rhymes

There's a constant humming of the heart in rhythm's feigned semblances, everything is just sampled stories self pre-awakening we are merely a perception of who we think we are, had a vivid dream I'd written the perfect analogy ended 'pon bittersweet rhymes calling out destined poetry

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/5/2016 5:11:00 PM

Whether it's humming of the heart or bittersweet rhymes, it is the outcome of a faithful muse which keeps you company, Paloma! Perhaps I could borrow your pen when mine runs dry! ~ Regards // paul

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/2/2016 10:11:00 AM

"merely a perception..." So true, Paloma. We often kid ourselves to stroke our vanity.

Darren White

Date: 11/2/2016 8:01:00 AM

"...just sampled stories self pre-awakening we are merely a perception of who we think we are..." // Yep :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/2/2016 12:09:00 AM

Sometimes dreams can seem more real than reality. Those are the dreams that make really interesting poetry! 7 ; )

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/1/2016 5:46:00 PM

I like this one. Very nice.

Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 6:20:00 PM

Thanks Heidi.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/1/2016 5:09:00 PM

Thanks for posting your gem, it is lovely..........A.M.

Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 6:19:00 PM

Thanks very much Afolabi.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/1/2016 4:42:00 PM

Yes, sometimes mine end up bittersweet instead of pure milk chocolate but then someone will like them and I am thinking well there was a reason for me writing that one..Sara..My catcha letters were xxx..LOL

Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 6:18:00 PM

Ha captcha is silly sometimes, as is poetry. Thanks Sara! :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/1/2016 3:56:00 PM

Your poetry is so off the charts good. I find I end up reading your work several times over and always am amazed each time. I had a vivid dream I could write like you, sadly is was just a dream. :) This was beautiful Paloma.

Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 6:17:00 PM

Wow, you blew me away with this review, thanks so much Chris! :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 11/1/2016 3:47:00 PM

Beautifully worded and heavy in content. My compliments, Paloma, I envy you.

Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 6:16:00 PM

Thanks so much Ralph, kind to say.