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Bittersweet Rhymes

There's a constant humming of the heart in rhythm's feigned semblances, everything is just sampled stories self pre-awakening we are merely a perception of who we think we are, had a vivid dream I'd written the perfect analogy ended 'pon bittersweet rhymes calling out destined poetry

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Date: 11/5/2016 5:11:00 PM
Whether it's humming of the heart or bittersweet rhymes, it is the outcome of a faithful muse which keeps you company, Paloma! Perhaps I could borrow your pen when mine runs dry! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 11/2/2016 10:11:00 AM
"merely a perception..." So true, Paloma. We often kid ourselves to stroke our vanity.
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Date: 11/2/2016 8:01:00 AM
"...just sampled stories self pre-awakening we are merely a perception of who we think we are..." // Yep :)
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Date: 11/2/2016 12:09:00 AM
Sometimes dreams can seem more real than reality. Those are the dreams that make really interesting poetry! 7 ; )
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Date: 11/1/2016 5:46:00 PM
I like this one. Very nice.
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Date: 11/1/2016 6:20:00 PM
Thanks Heidi.
Date: 11/1/2016 5:09:00 PM
Thanks for posting your gem, it is lovely..........A.M.
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Date: 11/1/2016 6:19:00 PM
Thanks very much Afolabi.
Date: 11/1/2016 4:42:00 PM
Yes, sometimes mine end up bittersweet instead of pure milk chocolate but then someone will like them and I am thinking well there was a reason for me writing that one..Sara..My catcha letters were xxx..LOL
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Date: 11/1/2016 6:18:00 PM
Ha captcha is silly sometimes, as is poetry. Thanks Sara! :)
Date: 11/1/2016 3:56:00 PM
Your poetry is so off the charts good. I find I end up reading your work several times over and always am amazed each time. I had a vivid dream I could write like you, sadly is was just a dream. :) This was beautiful Paloma.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 6:17:00 PM
Wow, you blew me away with this review, thanks so much Chris! :)
Date: 11/1/2016 3:47:00 PM
Beautifully worded and heavy in content. My compliments, Paloma, I envy you.
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Date: 11/1/2016 6:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Ralph, kind to say.