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Bitter truths for tiny forks

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bitter

[ This poem is a Tanka Tritych with 3 Tankas as related viewpoints ]

food fit for palaces
prepared with expert chef's care —
served to a small child
gets an instant revulsion
they're so brutally honest

nature hard-wired tongues
to guard against bitter greens
which could be poison
like veggies appear to be
to a child with veg decree

one bite - that's the pact
then child can eat another
food morsel they like
each taste an invitation
to get braver by tasting

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Date: 8/13/2025 9:22:00 PM
made me smile John - my son loved veggies - especially mushrooms and sprouts lol - he wasnt into sweets so i got the goodie bags from a party lol! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/13/2025 9:25:00 PM
yeah thanks - half you luck!

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