Bitter Sweet Words

A poem is a touch
When life is itchy
It ease a burden
If you read it by heart
The words are simple
No one get stuck
If you get the message
Just let it flow freely
To imagination relay
Sweet or bitter words
Are all therein if you wait
Till all the lines you read
You felt the emotions you get
Just don't pretend it hurts
Or smile if it struck you the most.

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Date: 11/8/2024 5:43:00 PM
Hello Hugo, A poem can lessen the burden. It can heal the pain. i know because a poem healed me. A wonderful poem. My fav. Lots of love here. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/9/2024 11:27:00 AM
In my heart I have forgiven him. i do have unanswered questions. i will never know the answers to. Much love here /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/9/2024 11:23:00 AM
Hello Hugo, Yes poetry is medicine to people. I was hurt badly by my husband. The anger grew stronger every day. Until i could not take it any more. I chose a poem a poet created I read it a few times and each time I did this, the hurt I was feeling got less and less. Now i put this all behind me. I have moved on.
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Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 11/8/2024 9:41:00 PM
Poetry is a medicine to most people. I believe line words rhyme or not really heals the heart, the mind, the body, and the soul. It purify, it rectify, it fortify and it cleans the drowsies, the dirts, the doubts, the confusion, the evils of this world. It turns war to peace, it negotiates opposition, it change the direction from destruction to prosperity, it melts hate to love and it makes us a newborn man in the body and in the spirit. You're right, it lighteb a burden. Thank you, Darlene for the right perspective of a poet. I love you more. Keep safe./ Hugo.
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