Bitter Pill

You can tear me apart with your words
That line by line wound deeper still
And yet you appear to not see the knife
you use to slowly bleed my soul.

No matter, for when in innocence
I relay back to those I trust 
to see if  my pains are misfelt
or misunderstood, they''ll fuel.

What I say to someone close
when hurt I deem to say in confidence,
that such conversation style with fact
is in own home should remain as that.

But wait, no, for there is a Judas among us
one who betrays such confiding.
For they will twist, turn and tear
every word taken for to assume gossip.

Chinese whispers,
a bit here, less there and then wait.
Telephone will ring
and then accusations outpour.

I would not mind, 
but this is second time 
after its come down to helping out
one who needs it at time.

There will not be a third
for within your jealous trinity 
I shall entrust no more.
For no need have I to play such games.

Lost you will remain
until such times as you realise
and apologise between you.
Where you'll hurt one another more.

Maybe then you will see
it was the one not from same mold
for that was indeed the one
who kept all quiet until now.

Knowing this one said this
That one does that
They did the other
'Tis no interest nor business of mine.

The one who for too many times
let the ice melt from her back
to warm with pleasantry once more
Even though she'd had enough long, long before.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/3/2009 10:24:00 AM
Anna-Marie, Gossip can be such a drag on one's life. That is why I try to never talk about others. I don't want to have to defend my words. And things become so different the further down the gossip line one goes. Excellent write! You said it well NO GOSSIP ALLOWED if you want to be happy!!! Love to you! Dane Ann
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Date: 11/2/2009 2:55:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry this beautiful sunny day Anna-Marie. May you have a beautiful week filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2009 11:25:00 AM
There's an old saying "sticks and stones might break my bones but words can't hurt me". But if we don't learn how to live from our hearts of love, words very well can, and do hurt us, in the worst way. An amazing write Anna. Thanks for your most recent comment. Yes there was a miss-type, thanks for calling my attention to it. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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