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Bitter Mosaic

Stretched to elasticity’s extreme… nothing more to give; like an overturned cup, the nectar drained and dried to granulated etchings on the rim. What was that said about a heart filled to the brim, running over with love’s treasures? A bitter heart leaks away till after time and after tears, grief’s blank mosaic tiles the floor, and the steps of all who enter echo in the dark. © 1987, Faye Lanham Gibson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/12/2014 1:23:00 PM
Another poem of yours that is very moving, Faye-- and I really like the metaphors that you used here, I especially liked your last stanza here, kind of have that haunting tone-- I wish I had more time to read more of your poems, hopefully in the future...
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Date: 4/8/2014 6:19:00 AM
PS: Gonna tell her why I call you 'cher' soon...
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Date: 4/8/2014 6:15:00 AM
Thanks Deb! Isn't she a wonderful poet? - Tim
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Date: 4/7/2014 9:56:00 PM
A very sad verse great metaphor in the use of mosaic tiles, welcome to Soup. Light & Love
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