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Bitter Handshake With Failure

Victory runs around in the speed of whirl wind optimism deputizing great confidence self belief joins achievement’s prestigious caucus getting the score, even before scoring the goal are preparations to this perennial battle An aptitude test, much needed for the next step growth must take place, with this one more push headache plagues germination, after two tries this time around, the aim and shot will kill the bird squashing to subdue all disappointments campaigns. Winning and gaining grounds but suddenly heart pierced sadly losing by a fraction of a fraction the lights go off, once again darkness reign supreme efforts viciously judged and condemned by ‘almost’ as the next four years plead for another attempt
for the poetry contest "Pierced" sponsored by rob carmack

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Date: 3/5/2015 12:30:00 PM
Ah yes.... Failures are a way of training the heart and mind. Accepting and overcoming failure allows you to grow. It also makes victories when they do come, a little more sweet. :o) Nice write!
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Date: 3/3/2015 12:34:00 PM
Hello Funom, How inspiring is this great write! The competitive spirit must remain undaunted! We all fall down; but in rising we accomplish greatness. Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Kimberly
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/21/2015 12:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Kimberly...I really appreciate your words

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