Magan Szentesi Poet Pantoum

Bitter Cold

The harsh night casts towering shadows
The bitter cold sweeps by
Little flakes of blades scatter about
Falling to the cold hard ground

The bitter cold sweeps by
The last breath of heat has been stolen
Falling to the cold hard ground
The strong breeze thunders by

The last breath of heat has been stolen
Little flakes of blades scatter about
The strong breeze thunders by 
The harsh night casts towering shadows 



24/3/16

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Vladislav Raven April 7, 2016 at 2:52 PM Hi Magan, a deep and interesting write. Congratulations on your win in the contest....Mike.

Poet Destroyer A April 6, 2016 at 9:59 PM Magan, Congrats on your "Pantoum --Poet's Choice Win." ~LINDA~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 5, 2016 at 5:29 AM Great work Magan.. no wonder top podium.. big congrats!

Charlie Smith April 4, 2016 at 8:50 PM Congratulations Magan, a very deserving win...

Jan Allison April 4, 2016 at 4:52 PM Such deep and dark imagery congrats on your win Magan:-) hugs Jan xx

David William Breidenthal April 3, 2016 at 4:34 AM Awesome one! A 7!