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Bitter Cold

The harsh night casts towering shadows The bitter cold sweeps by Little flakes of blades scatter about Falling to the cold hard ground The bitter cold sweeps by The last breath of heat has been stolen Falling to the cold hard ground The strong breeze thunders by The last breath of heat has been stolen Little flakes of blades scatter about The strong breeze thunders by The harsh night casts towering shadows 24/3/16

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Date: 4/7/2016 2:52:00 PM
Hi Magan, a deep and interesting write. Congratulations on your win in the contest....Mike.
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Date: 4/6/2016 9:59:00 PM
Magan, Congrats on your "Pantoum --Poet's Choice Win." ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/5/2016 5:29:00 AM
Great work Magan.. no wonder top podium.. big congrats!
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Date: 4/4/2016 8:50:00 PM
Congratulations Magan, a very deserving win...
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Date: 4/4/2016 4:52:00 PM
Such deep and dark imagery congrats on your win Magan:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/3/2016 4:34:00 AM
Awesome one! A 7!
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