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Bitter Cold

In the midst of cold so bitter Lies the fear of its pain From my youth I remember It stealing my breath away It closed my nose tightly together It slapped my face as in shame Cold like that you remember The shivering seems to remain I will not return where it's bitter again Cannot understand why so many stay I'd rather stay where winters are milder Than shiver and shake while starting a car Cold so bitter is never forgotten It's impression stamped like boot bottoms Crunching loudly in my head Then reminders of getting pelted With bundles as it melts from trees Walking home from school through the park Yes the memories of my youth are beautiful The blinding blanket spraying each tree But deep in the purity of the white Lies that demon, the freeze monster Taking the breath away holding it ransom Until temperatures rise to keep him away Leaving him bitter, angry until next time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/27/2014 12:34:00 PM
A frosty freezing temp poem but for us in the sweltering land tropics to chill seems more exotic and fun. So i enjoyd yor poem. Pls do coment my latest poem.
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Date: 1/8/2014 7:58:00 AM
Brrrr....chilly. Good to see a poem from you....and an excellent poem too. Im always ready for winter but then it gets here and im like....go away...ha...it doesn't even get that cold here...;)
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Date: 1/7/2014 8:39:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Jennifer. I can definitely relate to the bitter cold feeling,around his time of year. Great expression in your words, enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 1/7/2014 1:43:00 PM
- Jennifer, a powerful and very well written poem - A poem I can gladly recommend ... best quality - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/7/2014 7:42:00 PM
Thank you Anne my muse has been slow lately but the weather reminded me of its use today. J

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