Notes About The Poem

Bitter Blues

I often struggle to make peace
with nagging relapses that,
like endless tides, come
then I need to chase away.

Intrusive rekindlings of loss,
of wanting to resurrect the past,
each time needing to go through the motions
of convincing myself it's pointless.

Confined, trapped, buckled in,
I ride this live rollercoaster
that leaves me feeling disillusioned,
frustration having a bitter rancid taste.



AP: 3rd place 2026, Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Nyxnah Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 3:57 AM
This reads like a quiet scream ,raw, heavy, and painfully familiar. You've put the weight of silent battles into words.
Gauthier Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 4:23 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Hannah ~
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