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Bitten By September

Forbidden to remember Terrified to forget She is bitten by September As the rising sun sets He sinks his teeth into her cold, lifeless flesh As what is almost breaking is her very last breath The agonizing fire courses angrily through her veins She would do most anything to stop it, the anguish and the pain She pleads for her death They hear it in her cries What has she ever done for this life to be lead? The bitter truth and the bitter lies Her steaming red blood is staining the floor She struggles to keep her eyes even more She tries to survive, she tries to be okay But she won't be alive come the next day The reason as why she is holding on is fading The darkness is pulling her under, an undeniable waiting Her fears don't consume her, it's the fire that is killing She assumed that she was, but she truly wasn't willing She thought she was stronger She thought her heart could take it But it won't be much longer No, she is afraid she won't make it Crimson red matters her hair And what she cries out is a sin All the others can do is stare As she fights a battle she will most likely not win Her breathing turns shallow Her heart beat decreases Her eyes are now hallow Her heart beat seizes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/2/2009 8:22:00 PM
Interesting write, bitten by september, Welcome to soup. Moses
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Date: 8/2/2009 4:29:00 PM
I can feel the fear and terror of what is happening here. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 7/31/2009 7:15:00 AM
What an outstanding write you have here Kristen. I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup.I wish you the best in your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/31/2009 6:51:00 AM
Super poem Kristen, a warm welcome to you on the Soup>>James
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Date: 7/31/2009 2:48:00 AM
Enjoyed this read.... see there are a few new poets on her so I had to drop my two cents. Hope you will write more as well... the secret to becoming known on here to stay active commenting on others poetry as well. Hope to read more from you and enjoy your day. :)
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Date: 7/30/2009 8:41:00 PM
o THE TALENT- HOW BREATAKING ARE THESE WORDS!! ALL THE BEST! lOVE THESE CHOICES BELOW Forbidden to remember Terrified to forget She is bitten by September As the rising sun sets Her breathing turns shallow Her heart beat decreases Her eyes are now hallow Her heart beat seizes
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