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Bits of Sea Glass

adorning apricot stardust silently enveloped turbulent waves, gingerly dappling each ingrained bit of sea glass whence the tides were stilled, 'til they ebbed 'tween streams of serene spring waters, rushing sky castles outer banks in cascades of tranquil awed hushes overflowing midst surrendered fantasies

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Jannie Breedt

Date: 11/10/2016 1:44:00 PM

How do you do it? Its as if I am standing there in the ebb tide amongst little eddies. The swaying motion is felt rather than read. Then it floats as if i were merely dreaming it. Wonderful vocab you have

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/10/2016 5:10:00 AM

Is that a whirlpool? Wow, I love it:) wonderful, Paloma:)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/4/2016 4:35:00 PM

such a wonderful concrete form which flows so beautifully. Paloma your creativity is incredible:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White

Date: 11/4/2016 3:10:00 PM

Such incredible imagery Paloma. I LOVE this, a 7

Tim Smith

Date: 11/4/2016 12:19:00 PM

Your pretty picture flows as lovely as the wave you created

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/4/2016 9:31:00 AM

Wow if this is light poetry what happens when you get serious. Just excellent. A Fav.

Chris Green

Date: 11/4/2016 9:15:00 AM

The title alone enchanted me, I saw that and knew before even clicking on to this soft and amazing piece of work I would fall in love with what I found inside. And I was not wrong. Your poetry is off the charts, it is mesmerizing and so very unique. Loved this Paloma.