Biting My Tongue Again

My tongue
has no more blood; 
no tissue to slide through my teeth.

I have bitten my tongue
so long
my message deflates beneath.


©  2011  ~JSLambert Esquire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Baity Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 1:01 AM
luvin' this one.. i definitely know the feeling...smiles...chiquita
Green Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 8:09 PM
the broken path of our words,,,,,,,,desperate to say,,,,our scares are our life.,.............................
Neels Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 12:26 PM
Oh my my, I just love how you say so much by just biting your tongue JS :) enjoyed this and thank you for popping in on my madness :)
K. Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 10:48 AM
ohh ouchy! You should've seen me cringe at the thought of this! Very awesomely depicted, JS! Ouch.
Foulk Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 4:12 PM
been there many times my friend, this was a great write.
Hornaday Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 1:35 PM
LOVE IT
Devonshire Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 1:47 AM
LOL Sometimes we're forced to bite our tongues so we don't hurt people's feelings, but as you say, our messages are never conveyed. Well expressed in a concise manner! Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 12:11 AM
OUCH, message recieved!! Hey, soupmail for ya!
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