Alexis Y. Poet Triolet

Bite the Bullet

Surrounded by darkness, no light in sight,
  nerves rattled and afraid to move.
Something was wrong, it didn’t feel right,
surrounded by darkness, no light in sight.
Bang!Bit bullet,he had something to prove,
 blood flowed from her mouth that night.
   Nerves rattled and afraid to move.
surrounded by darkness, no light in sight.






Inspired by the Pick A Title
Contest : Triolet
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
5 Bite The Bullet
10/25/2020

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Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2020 at 6:33 PM great way to do the Bite the Bullet topic, Alexis. Congrats on the win

Paul Callus November 13, 2020 at 1:52 PM A tragic Triolet, Alexis! Congratulations on your fine showing! Regards // paul

Edward Ibeh November 13, 2020 at 11:58 AM Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing triolet, Alexis:-) Alexis Y. November 14, 2020 at 4:10 AM Hi Edward, You held an good contest. Thanks for my placement. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis

Janice Canerdy November 13, 2020 at 7:20 AM Alexis, your excellent triolet tells of a shocking, tragic event--very descriptive. CONGRATS! Janice

Vijay Pandit November 13, 2020 at 5:27 AM Back with congrats on you win, Alexis.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 13, 2020 at 2:25 AM - Congratulations on your great win, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Alice Fowler November 12, 2020 at 5:48 PM Congratulations on the win Alexis! Linda

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 10, 2020 at 10:58 AM Excellent poem, Alexis! The impending fear is ink palpable. Your quill strokes are of great tapestry beauty. Love and joy forever.

Jan Allison October 29, 2020 at 11:12 AM you certainly went to town on the theme with this deep dark poem, well penned Alexis, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich October 28, 2020 at 7:21 AM Great triolet writing, Alexis. It seems a literal translation of bite the bullet, makiing it tragic!

Caren Krutsinger October 27, 2020 at 5:26 PM Wiponderfully penned Alexis

Newton Ranaweera October 26, 2020 at 5:18 PM A great entry, indeed for the contest, Alexie!! A witty word play to evoke meaning!!

Gershon Wolf October 26, 2020 at 5:08 PM Chilling, Alexis. Superb entry for the contest. Good luck! ~ Gershon

Beryl Edmonds October 26, 2020 at 1:51 PM A fantastic Triolet, fits the chosen title perfectly, good luck in the contest . . . Belle:-)

Rico Leffanta October 26, 2020 at 11:48 AM I loved scaring the Hell out of people in the dark of night, especially when I was in Boot Camp! Its so much fun! Aloha! Rico

Peter Dome October 26, 2020 at 11:29 AM Very impacting and visual I could almost taste the fear. we; done.

Jennifer Proxenos October 26, 2020 at 9:15 AM Your poem is excellent! Good luck in the contest. Hugs and love, Jennifer.

Silent One October 26, 2020 at 6:51 AM I am not a big fan of this contest as I think there will be many sad and disturbing poems created... I do not like this term very much.. However, you did a great poem..

Vijay Pandit October 26, 2020 at 5:38 AM Your story resonates, Alexis. All the best.

Tom Cunningham October 26, 2020 at 4:34 AM Nothing worse than being in the dark unable to see anything and having to feel your way around Tom

Joanna Daniel October 26, 2020 at 3:44 AM A nice triolet you have here, Alexis:)

Victor Buhagiar October 26, 2020 at 12:10 AM What a great way to describe an ugly situation. Best for a win, you deserve it. ~~

Evelyn Judy Buehler October 25, 2020 at 10:08 PM A captivating and well crafted triolet. An impressive entry for the contest. :=)

Anisha Dutta October 25, 2020 at 9:23 PM Strongly composed. I am moved. Sure to win. Hugs.