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This for my friend Triveni

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When you are feeling extra blue. You just wish the earth would bury you, In your mind let the earth make a mound. Gather all the joy you have ever found. Don't let anything in life seem so slanted. Tell the world that you've just been planted.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2024 8:43:00 AM

This is an awesome little poem, Wen

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/23/2024 9:29:00 AM

Glad you liked it Andrea, thanks for your comment.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/21/2024 2:07:00 PM

I hope she's doing well with her tests. I have not heard. You've written a sweet little verse for her dear Wen. :)

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/23/2024 9:31:00 AM

I thought you meant medical tests Laf, and I asked her about them. She didn't know what I was on about. Then she realized you were confusing her with Hiya Sharma!!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/21/2024 3:08:00 PM

I didn't know about her tests Laf ? Maybe she didn't want me to know. I have just been hoping that she would come back to us. .Wen

Sam Scott

Date: 3/19/2024 5:10:00 AM

What a sweet little verse. Sx (nice picture too)

Speaks Volumes
Date: 3/19/2024 7:11:00 AM

aww thnx Sam that's sweet of you to comment .. Wen