Bite Me

Honey you done used me up
Chewed me up
And carelessly spit me out

Now several years passed
And I see you again
You all smiles
You offer me the chance
(Again)
To help you out
“Come on
Don’t you wanna be my friend?”

I say,
“Nope”

Honey you done used me up
Chewed me up
And carelessly spit me out


I say,
“Thanks for the lesson
I now pay attention
And no longer work for momentary smiles
And long-lasting sneers

Honey you done used me up
Chewed me up
And carelessly spit me out
So I say, Nope
I don’t care what you want”
And I smile back

But you’re not upset
(At least you don’t show it)
Your eyes glaze over a second
And you’re instantly off
Looking for another ‘friend to help you out’

And I wonder
Do you ever get the chance
To brush your teeth
Between victims?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Madonsela Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 5:01 PM
i felt you in this piece. As i was reading another part of me was cheering me on, as i knw what you speak of oh to well . I enjoyed ur poetry today. *smiles* Ron
Wrenn-Fiore Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 6:36 AM
I really liked this poem, it was very well-written. I could feel it. robinwrennfiore
Postolachi Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 5:26 AM
haha :)))) Amazing!! Very well.. Congrats! :))))
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 11:09 AM
((()))((()))Clap!Clap!..Congrats on your great win! Sara
Guzzi Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 3:32 PM
I must say I was NOT surprised to see your write amongst the winners! Light & Love
K. Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 1:29 PM
This sure came across to me as very real, KJ-- really enjoyed how you say it as it is! Congrats!
Freeman Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 9:16 AM
KJ, a beautiful poem friend, "Congratulations" on a worthy poem honor. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 5:13 AM
Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in the Poetrysoup International Contest for August 2011 KJ. Love, Carol
Mantle Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 3:37 AM
Congrats to you on your win. This is a great piece. Best wishes Em :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 2:17 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win x
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 9:04 PM
This is awesome, I am sure loving these HM's down here!! Congratulations!!!
Janczak Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 6:33 PM
this is very nice i like it alot. i like the end. it all flows very nice
Brown Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 6:24 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals KJ. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 6:07 PM
yike! but I hear YOU..seems like I just wrote one about a 'friend' with friends like these who needs enemys! Congrad's on getting 2 through! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 12:40 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week K.J. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 2:48 PM
Title says it all, K.J. I hope you really done spit her out. Congrats on the selection. daver
Hooten Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 5:57 PM
Actually, I'm the she and he's the 'biter'...a former student and why I retired a bit earlier than I had planned. Thanks. Dunno where you live; but it's sleeting tonight here in Michigan. So I wish you warm thoughts. And don't let the wind bite...KJ
Jones Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 8:36 PM
lol... wonderful punch line!
Brown Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 4:33 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you KJ. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 12:00 PM
Enjoyed this write with wit and dark humor
Lindenmuth Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Good expressive write with biting humor all puns intended.
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