Bite Me

Ask me to do for you
Ask me yes, yes…yes.
But if you screwed a friend or two
I’d say bite me! Fits you best!
Chew on that?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Herbert Grace Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 7:58 AM
SPLENDID ART AND INTERESTING POEM
Kendrick Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 8:52 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned....Good luck in the contest..Sara
Chachere Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 11:50 PM
lol.the ending is priceless for sure. chew on that, wow.(: ~Always&Forever Lynette
Sweetheart Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 12:18 PM
Forgot.. my entry for Grook is Word Power though I don't think its much of a Grook.. I cannot write sarcastic poetry.. only luv and passion suits me best... lu..
Sweetheart Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 12:17 PM
Ouch..TEACH ...what brought this write on.. but I do like it .. a flavor all its own... oh I see now.. its your Grook entry.. good luck.. super one .. pupil has enjoyed.. am finally HOME.. with pets and family jumping all around.. so fun.. they are doing all the chores for MOM... raised some good sons I did.. haha.. and the pets and luving MaMa home now to fuss over them.. wait till the grand babies get here tomorrow.. oh boy.. luv..
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 12:55 PM
LOVE it, Deb. The type of Grook I would like to write, if I even understood its rules. haha. Hey, I need to ask you something: do you prefer just that we discuss ONE number in your contest, or maybe two numbers, or do you want a discussion of all numbers in general? Which is preferable? I think doing one is probably a lot simpler. Is that a good way to go? Just telling why that is a special number to you? Luv, Andrea
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 6:34 AM
Hi Deb. I'm glad you are my friend. I'd hate to be on the other side of you! (No...I know...you're just a sweet little pussycat.) LOL Love you. By the way, I am going to try to start commenting again. I have just been too weepy on and off, these past three months…commenting became difficult. I do appreciate you, though, as you know. Thanks for being there for me. God be with you and keep up the excellent writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 6:34 AM
Great Grook, Deb.! Good luck in the contest. Smiles, Dane
Blakeley Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 5:39 AM
I like that..your a tough girl..huh ?
Amah Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 11:36 PM
... fondly ... pleasantly ... metaphorically ... well-positioned ... Imp-Possiblely ... for the weaver's nest ... 'tis the write, my write, our write, the clan's write!!! simply, a perfect cast on the marble of the memory ... Debbie, cheers! Canny
Hales Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 4:22 PM
like it .... Thanks for my comment it was about my nan bless her xx sarah x
Conway Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 3:03 PM
Wonderful Grook Debbie! Good luck in the contest!~Tirzah~
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