Bite Me

Ask me to do for you
Ask me yes, yes…yes.
But if you screwed a friend or two
I’d say bite me! Fits you best!
Chew on that?

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Sekitto Herbert Grace

Date: 8/28/2010 7:58:00 AM

SPLENDID ART AND INTERESTING POEM

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2010 8:52:00 AM

Interesting thoughts that you have penned....Good luck in the contest..Sara

Lynette Chachere

Date: 7/11/2010 11:50:00 PM

lol.the ending is priceless for sure. chew on that, wow.(: ~Always&Forever Lynette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/10/2010 12:18:00 PM

Forgot.. my entry for Grook is Word Power though I don't think its much of a Grook.. I cannot write sarcastic poetry.. only luv and passion suits me best... lu..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/10/2010 12:17:00 PM

Ouch..TEACH ...what brought this write on.. but I do like it .. a flavor all its own... oh I see now.. its your Grook entry.. good luck.. super one .. pupil has enjoyed.. am finally HOME.. with pets and family jumping all around.. so fun.. they are doing all the chores for MOM... raised some good sons I did.. haha.. and the pets and luving MaMa home now to fuss over them.. wait till the grand babies get here tomorrow.. oh boy.. luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2010 12:55:00 PM

LOVE it, Deb. The type of Grook I would like to write, if I even understood its rules. haha. Hey, I need to ask you something: do you prefer just that we discuss ONE number in your contest, or maybe two numbers, or do you want a discussion of all numbers in general? Which is preferable? I think doing one is probably a lot simpler. Is that a good way to go? Just telling why that is a special number to you? Luv, Andrea

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/9/2010 6:34:00 AM

Hi Deb. I'm glad you are my friend. I'd hate to be on the other side of you! (No...I know...you're just a sweet little pussycat.) LOL Love you. By the way, I am going to try to start commenting again. I have just been too weepy on and off, these past three months…commenting became difficult. I do appreciate you, though, as you know. Thanks for being there for me. God be with you and keep up the excellent writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/9/2010 6:34:00 AM

Great Grook, Deb.! Good luck in the contest. Smiles, Dane

Gail Blakeley

Date: 7/9/2010 5:39:00 AM

I like that..your a tough girl..huh ?

Canny Amah

Date: 7/8/2010 11:36:00 PM

... fondly ... pleasantly ... metaphorically ... well-positioned ... Imp-Possiblely ... for the weaver's nest ... 'tis the write, my write, our write, the clan's write!!! simply, a perfect cast on the marble of the memory ... Debbie, cheers! Canny