Bite Me

Crow caw synthesizer flight
enrapture blackest pit of night.
Rumble drum the saccharine fawn
cold craw stuck remnant
of omnivorous dawn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 2:40 PM
Hummmm. This one has a mysterious darkness to it. It is well written. I could almost envision a group of girls in the woods holding hands, dancing in circles, chanting these words. The words are enticing. Great poetry. Dane Ann
Winter Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 9:56 AM
If you only knew how this title drew me in - soup mail!
Von Graves Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 9:43 AM
I do not bite only nibble haha very good write no frankenstein mentioned here but im guessing that wouldnt make much sense kinda like freddy cruger scratching your back Very good write a very good flow to it. well ive got to go villigers storming the castle as usal no biggie have a spooky evening
Knop Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 5:09 AM
Great imagination and pictures, Deborah! Love, Gert
Strand Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 11:39 PM
Thank you for you welcome blog comments today Debbie.Rgds Brian
Moreno Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 9:06 PM
Great imagery Deborah...Raul
George   Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 7:44 PM
Chilling! Wow! Deb. lainie
Burton Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 5:34 PM
Enjoyed this very much and have a great night:)
Devonshire Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 1:23 PM
Provocative images and a truly clever, original verse form with good use of rhyme and meter. Very nice, Deborah! Love, carolyn
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 11:14 AM
How do you do it? The flow is perfect and your words invite lingering and thinking. I must say that your writes continue to be very enjoyable every time I visit your site. Love to you. Dane Ann
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