Bite Me

Crow caw synthesizer flight enrapture blackest pit of night. Rumble drum the saccharine fawn cold craw stuck remnant of omnivorous dawn.

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/31/2010 2:40:00 PM

Hummmm. This one has a mysterious darkness to it. It is well written. I could almost envision a group of girls in the woods holding hands, dancing in circles, chanting these words. The words are enticing. Great poetry. Dane Ann

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/27/2010 9:56:00 AM

If you only knew how this title drew me in - soup mail!

Dr Igor Von Graves

Date: 1/26/2010 9:43:00 AM

I do not bite only nibble haha very good write no frankenstein mentioned here but im guessing that wouldnt make much sense kinda like freddy cruger scratching your back Very good write a very good flow to it. well ive got to go villigers storming the castle as usal no biggie have a spooky evening

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/15/2010 5:09:00 AM

Great imagination and pictures, Deborah! Love, Gert

Brian Strand

Date: 1/14/2010 11:39:00 PM

Thank you for you welcome blog comments today Debbie.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/14/2010 9:06:00 PM

Great imagery Deborah...Raul

Elaine George

Date: 1/14/2010 7:44:00 PM

Chilling! Wow! Deb. lainie

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/14/2010 5:34:00 PM

Enjoyed this very much and have a great night:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/14/2010 1:23:00 PM

Provocative images and a truly clever, original verse form with good use of rhyme and meter. Very nice, Deborah! Love, carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/14/2010 11:14:00 AM

How do you do it? The flow is perfect and your words invite lingering and thinking. I must say that your writes continue to be very enjoyable every time I visit your site. Love to you. Dane Ann