Bisolar Disorder


Be wary of the sun
The only gent that I know
Who will kill the blades
As he burns their shade
Loving to see them grow

February 14, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/18/2016 7:53:00 PM
wow, great thinking on this one. Congrats.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/18/2016 8:26:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. This one was a new style for me so I had to go for a different angle. I'm happy it placed well -- thanks for dropping by with your kind remark. Ciao, my friend!
Date: 2/17/2016 11:22:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Sam.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/18/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thank you Dr., I really appreciate the kind comment. Have a great day!
Date: 2/17/2016 12:09:00 PM
A clever Grook, Sam; the negative and positive sides of solar rays. Congrats on a merited win. // paul
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/17/2016 2:44:00 PM
thank you, Paul. I appreciate the praise on the work..it was my first take on a Grook so I'm happy that the words came through. have a great day!
Date: 2/17/2016 9:50:00 AM
Sam, Congrats on your Grook win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/17/2016 10:37:00 AM
Well thank you, Linda. You are very kind to drop by with your regards, they are much appreciated. Have a great day!
Date: 2/17/2016 8:41:00 AM
very clever, sam.. big congrats and huggs
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/17/2016 10:36:00 AM
Thank you, Nette. I'm glad the work was able to communicate, I was a little unsure of it going into this contest. Thanks for your congrats, ciao!
Date: 2/17/2016 2:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/17/2016 7:54:00 AM
Thanks, Susan, I appreciate it. Have a great day!
Date: 2/16/2016 11:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win Sam
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/17/2016 7:53:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Joseph.
Date: 2/16/2016 5:58:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Sam:-) hugs jan xx
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/16/2016 6:17:00 PM
thank you kindly, Jan. I appreciate the warm regards, ciao!
Date: 2/16/2016 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on the contest, Sam! I really enjoyed the thought behind this grook, and the irony that the sun gives life as well as destroys it. A very different topic.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/16/2016 5:33:00 PM
I'm glad it registered..a different topic for a different type of style (for me). I'm very happy to have placed well; thanks for co-sponsoring this one Timothy. I look forward to your future contests as well.
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