Bisolar Disorder


Be wary of the sun
The only gent that I know
Who will kill the blades
As he burns their shade
Loving to see them grow

February 14, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 7:53 PM
wow, great thinking on this one. Congrats.
Jameson Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 8:26 PM
Thank you, Andrea. This one was a new style for me so I had to go for a different angle. I'm happy it placed well -- thanks for dropping by with your kind remark. Ciao, my friend!
A. Sharma Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 11:22 PM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Sam.
Jameson Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Thank you Dr., I really appreciate the kind comment. Have a great day!
Callus Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 12:09 PM
A clever Grook, Sam; the negative and positive sides of solar rays. Congrats on a merited win. // paul
Jameson Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:44 PM
thank you, Paul. I appreciate the praise on the work..it was my first take on a Grook so I'm happy that the words came through. have a great day!
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February 17, 2016 at 9:50 AM
Sam, Congrats on your Grook win. XOX ~LINDA~
Jameson Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Well thank you, Linda. You are very kind to drop by with your regards, they are much appreciated. Have a great day!
Onclaud Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 8:41 AM
very clever, sam.. big congrats and huggs
Jameson Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 10:36 AM
Thank you, Nette. I'm glad the work was able to communicate, I was a little unsure of it going into this contest. Thanks for your congrats, ciao!
Gentry Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 2:04 AM
Congratulations on your win!
Jameson Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 7:54 AM
Thanks, Susan, I appreciate it. Have a great day!
May Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 11:30 PM
Congrats on your win Sam
Jameson Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Thank you kindly, Joseph.
Allison Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 5:58 PM
Many congrats on your win Sam:-) hugs jan xx
Jameson Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 6:17 PM
thank you kindly, Jan. I appreciate the warm regards, ciao!
Hicks Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations on the contest, Sam! I really enjoyed the thought behind this grook, and the irony that the sun gives life as well as destroys it. A very different topic.
Jameson Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 5:33 PM
I'm glad it registered..a different topic for a different type of style (for me). I'm very happy to have placed well; thanks for co-sponsoring this one Timothy. I look forward to your future contests as well.
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