Birthing

on the edge of a bed
with feet resting
on a chair,
she lies.
strange faces set
on her writhing pain.

down hotel stairs
two men in white
carry
birth labor
into the light of day glare.

gulping in cold air,
her back arches
knees push open to
the ambulance door
wide as
arms flay into other hands.

calm now
a siren enters her hearing
flying, groaning, moving
into hospitalo smells
past staring eyes,
she crying, calling,
laughing,
rapping,
"the baby ... the baby ...
the baby is coming!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Strand Avatar
July 13, 2008 at 1:09 AM
Congrats on your featured poem Sue.Rgds Brian
Beer Avatar
July 12, 2008 at 6:55 PM
Very true to form, Sue. All of us who have been there know your words well. Including the men folk. Good work, God Bless, Cile
Pringle Avatar
July 9, 2008 at 7:33 PM
Boy am I glad men don't give birth. :-)
Mckenzie Avatar
July 9, 2008 at 11:45 AM
Sue Congratulations on you featured poem this week! Laura :0)
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July 9, 2008 at 11:29 AM
Vivid images forward your thoughts in this one. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. It's great having The Soup up again! Karen
Sheart Avatar
July 9, 2008 at 8:42 AM
The imagery is this outstanding write is vivid with emotions that touch what's real.Scary and exilerating all at the same time. Congrats on your wonderful feature write this week Sue! Love Light Truth Patricia
Brown Avatar
July 9, 2008 at 4:15 AM
Sue,congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Ferreyros Avatar
July 8, 2008 at 4:33 PM
Congrats Sue for "Birthing" another featured poem! Jaime
Jordan Avatar
July 7, 2008 at 9:10 PM
Sue great job of describing one of natures great miracles - congrats on the feature
Buys Avatar
July 6, 2008 at 6:50 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. A very vivid poem. Well done. Love Heidie
Winter Avatar
July 6, 2008 at 6:23 PM
Exciting and terrifying all at once! Great portrayal! Congrats Sue on your well deserved featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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July 6, 2008 at 6:21 PM
Congratulations Sue on "Birthing" being featured. An exciting time of life giving life. God Bless. Vince
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