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Birthday Wish

I wish you wish
Get me up with your honest kiss
The place where I'm alone
The only day I'll be blessed
Yeah I remember the moment
Where I passed
The only presence of yours
Seems fill my dream get me chest off

I wish you wish
Give me a long hug with your honest kiss
Take me away the place
Besides us nobody see
The endearment your eyes
Still split me in between
I'll break the sun move the stars
If against or your desire

lost loveghazal

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Pashang Salehi

August 4, 2016 at 5:16 PM

Nice poem, but the form you selected is wrong. This is not a "Ghazal".... Maybe free verse....

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March 3, 2016 at 6:00 AM

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