Marilene Evans Poet Rhyme

Birthday To Remember

BIRTHDAY TO REMEMBER
    
  My birthday with my two daughters was to die for.
                    Celebrating it in New Mexico
                     to enjoy the Hot Air Balloon
                           Fiesta and ride it,
             to see the Loretto Chapel in Santa Fe
              and to soak in mineral spring water.

          Was so excited with our trip for October,
          two thousand nine, flew to Albuquerque.
              Toured downtown and all around it.
                    Drove to Santa Fe, zoomed
          to the famous spiral staircase in Loretto
             Chapel and went to do what I adore.

        Soaking, relaxing in hot spring water before
               heading back to Albuquerque to go
                   to see all the Hot Air Balloons
                         so bright for being lit.
        Then our Hot Air Balloon ride, our trip finale.
          Birthday to remember with my daughters. 


A Little Memory - My Invented Form - Poetry
1/1/21     Constance La France

Used How Many Syllables and Rhyme Zone

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Sara Kendrick January 21, 2021 at 4:38 AM Ahhh!! I could see the scene. Very descriptive and alive winner. Congrats...Sara Marilene Evans January 21, 2021 at 11:09 AM Thanks so much, Sara! Thanks for the compliments too.

Constance La France January 19, 2021 at 12:07 PM Marilene, congratulations on your win in my contest, A Little Memory using my invented Rhyme form, wonderful poem, I like it a lot _Constance Marilene Evans January 19, 2021 at 8:15 PM Thanks so much Constance. I'm so glad you like it and thank you for my placement.

Victor Buhagiar January 1, 2021 at 11:01 PM A bit difficult for me this contest. Glad you composed it. And that you had fun. ~~ Marilene Evans January 2, 2021 at 7:35 AM Thanks Victor, it was quite a challenge. I had so much fun with my daughters... and scary too. After 10 minutes in the air, out hot air balloon fell... that's for another poem... HAPPY NEW YEAR!!