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Birthday To Remember

BIRTHDAY TO REMEMBER My birthday with my two daughters was to die for. Celebrating it in New Mexico to enjoy the Hot Air Balloon Fiesta and ride it, to see the Loretto Chapel in Santa Fe and to soak in mineral spring water. Was so excited with our trip for October, two thousand nine, flew to Albuquerque. Toured downtown and all around it. Drove to Santa Fe, zoomed to the famous spiral staircase in Loretto Chapel and went to do what I adore. Soaking, relaxing in hot spring water before heading back to Albuquerque to go to see all the Hot Air Balloons so bright for being lit. Then our Hot Air Balloon ride, our trip finale. Birthday to remember with my daughters. A Little Memory - My Invented Form - Poetry 1/1/21 Constance La France Used How Many Syllables and Rhyme Zone

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2021 4:38:00 AM

Ahhh!! I could see the scene. Very descriptive and alive winner. Congrats...Sara

Marilene Evans
Date: 1/21/2021 11:09:00 AM

Thanks so much, Sara! Thanks for the compliments too.

Constance La France

Date: 1/19/2021 12:07:00 PM

Marilene, congratulations on your win in my contest, A Little Memory using my invented Rhyme form, wonderful poem, I like it a lot _Constance

Marilene Evans
Date: 1/19/2021 8:15:00 PM

Thanks so much Constance. I'm so glad you like it and thank you for my placement.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/1/2021 11:01:00 PM

A bit difficult for me this contest. Glad you composed it. And that you had fun. ~~

Marilene Evans
Date: 1/2/2021 7:35:00 AM

Thanks Victor, it was quite a challenge. I had so much fun with my daughters... and scary too. After 10 minutes in the air, out hot air balloon fell... that's for another poem... HAPPY NEW YEAR!!