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Birthday Sonnet

Birthday Sonnet My love's not passive, shy and free of strife Nor are her eyes soft deep and limpid pools No, in those orbs there burns the fire of life Of value more than any precious jewels No perfect features hers as of a dream Nor model's swaying steps along chalk line With youthful body and a fresh faced mien She walks with purpose and arrives on time Soft words are not her currency of choice No Mary she to wash my feet with tears Sharp wit and humour exercise her voice And fed my soul and body throughout the years Though thorny words may cause my ears to smart Above it all she'll be here in my heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/20/2021 10:26:00 PM
It's really a beautiful poem penned~ wonderful that's; enjoyable
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Date: 6/22/2019 9:42:00 AM
Very nice, Geoff--I wish I were so adept at sonnets. Congrats on yr win, my friend.
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Date: 2/24/2018 6:07:00 PM
Witty poem, Geoffrey. Congrats on your win.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 3/3/2018 11:33:00 AM
Thank you,Line
Date: 2/24/2018 2:15:00 PM
I do so love a good sonnet, and this is great. Congrats on your win with this fine piece, Geoffrey, well done. Regards, Viv
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 3/3/2018 11:32:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words, Viv
Date: 2/23/2018 10:30:00 AM
beautiful sonnet Geoffrey, loved every word, thank you and congrats :) -luloo
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 3/3/2018 11:29:00 AM
Thanks to you, Luloo
Date: 6/7/2017 6:51:00 AM
Enjoyed this very much! A worthy sonnet that I shall save as a fave! :) Kim
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 3/3/2018 11:28:00 AM
Many thanks, Kim

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