Birthday Sonnet

Birthday Sonnet

My love's not passive, shy and free of strife
Nor are her eyes soft deep and limpid pools
No, in those orbs there burns the fire of life
Of value more than any precious jewels
No perfect features hers as of a dream
Nor model's swaying steps along chalk line
With youthful body and a fresh faced mien
She walks with purpose and arrives on time
Soft words are not her currency of choice
No Mary she to wash my feet with tears
Sharp wit and humour exercise her voice
And fed my  soul and body throughout the years
Though thorny words may cause my ears to smart
Above it all she'll be here in my heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Bangalee Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 10:26 PM
It's really a beautiful poem penned~ wonderful that's; enjoyable
Carber Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 9:42 AM
Very nice, Geoff--I wish I were so adept at sonnets. Congrats on yr win, my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 6:07 PM
Witty poem, Geoffrey. Congrats on your win.
Brewer Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Thank you,Line
Wigley Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 2:15 PM
I do so love a good sonnet, and this is great. Congrats on your win with this fine piece, Geoffrey, well done. Regards, Viv
Brewer Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 11:32 AM
Thanks for your kind words, Viv
Scars Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 10:30 AM
beautiful sonnet Geoffrey, loved every word, thank you and congrats :) -luloo
Brewer Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 11:29 AM
Thanks to you, Luloo
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:51 AM
Enjoyed this very much! A worthy sonnet that I shall save as a fave! :) Kim
Brewer Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 11:28 AM
Many thanks, Kim
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