Birthday Rebirth

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Reborn here now without baggage. Every year, as I'm delighted. From friends and forebears as adage. Roaring new birthday, beloved. Most pals are cheerful and friendly. Reborn here now without baggage. Smile, share witticisms with glory. As though it were priceless dunnage. Life goes, and far work to manage. Thought process is appropriate. Reborn here now without baggage. Destroy all hope of early shut. Written word can grant extra spice. There's still stacks for us to engage. A new zeal and desire for thrice. Reborn here now without baggage.
Written: October 12, 2021 Dawn Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 10/14/2021 1:46:00 AM
You’ve written a wonderful Quartern poem Lasaad, it’s classic. Love both the poetry and picture chosen to go with it. Best wishes, Belle
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Date: 10/13/2021 1:04:00 PM
Not sure what you’re trying to say but lovely phrases.
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Date: 10/13/2021 5:57:00 AM
Well done, Lassad--this form is hard to execute especially when the rhymes for the given word are hard to find. All the best.
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Date: 10/13/2021 6:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay. Your kind words mean a lot to me and are appreciated.
Date: 10/13/2021 1:56:00 AM
I've never written a quatern and rhyming is difficult for me But you wrote a great poem. Best of luck.
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Date: 10/13/2021 6:39:00 AM
Thank you so much, Victor, it's my first time to write a quatern as well, and I find it intriguing.
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