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Birthday Memory - the Secret Revealed

It was her birthday back in 'ninety-nine... our married daughter, thirty-eight years old. Her husband planned a party at their home. Above the table, floated blue balloons. Out came the lovely birthday cake dessert. Her husband held it up for us to see, while daughter glanced around so mystified. As we approved her pretty cake, she cried, "Please, someone read the words on that darn cake!" Presumed, was 'Happy Birthday' written there. Oh! 'Lynn's Having A Baby' instead, it said! That joyous memory with us will stay. So long they'd waited for a child to come; our precious, now sixteen years old, grandson. Sandra M. Haight ~4th Place~ Contest: A Special Secret Sponsor: Lewis Raynes Judged: 12/13/2017 ~2nd Place~ Contest: Combination of Three Words Sponsor: Laura Loo Judged: 01/03/2016 Required Words: Dessert, Memory, Balloons -------------------------------------------- True Story...See Real Cake Above
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Mccall Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 9:15 AM
What a great poem Sandra and congrats on your win.
Canerdy Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 9:36 PM
Sweet story, Sandra! Congrats! Janice
Selfa Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 8:14 AM
Congratulations Sandra for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans
Haight Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 12:00 PM
Thank you once again, Hansteven, for your nice visits and supportive comments. Sandra
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January 10, 2016 at 11:01 PM
Wel done, Sandra... take care. Love LINDA
Haight Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Thank you so much, Linda! Hugs, Sandra
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January 6, 2016 at 3:18 PM
AHH!!!! CONGRATS ON THE WIN AND THE GRANDSON NOW 16!!!SARA
Haight Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:47 PM
Hi Sara, thank you so much for your visit and congrats! Yes, he is the youngest by one month. We have five grandkids, ages, 26, 24, 21, 16, and 16. I wish you a healthy, happy new year, Sara. Hugs, Sandra
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January 5, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Hahahah.....like the sonnet, Sandra. Congratulations on your win!
Haight Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:48 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
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January 4, 2016 at 10:18 AM
SANDRA, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*
Haight Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Thank you so much, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
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January 3, 2016 at 1:54 PM
What a lovely memory, Sandra...and what a splendid surprise; it was well worth waiting for! ~ Congratulations on this top placement! ~ Regards // paul
Haight Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 3:49 PM
Thank you, Paul. So nice of you to stop by with your supportive comments and congrats. I wish you a very healthy and happy new year. Sandra
Cheema Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 11:24 AM
How sweet! Congrats SNdra!
Haight Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 3:50 PM
Thank you so much, Balveen. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Beautiful Sandra! Clever and silly, loved it! Thank you for your participation :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 3:50 PM
Thank you once again, Laura, for a very inspiring contest. I enjoyed participating, and I thank you also for my nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
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December 22, 2015 at 6:42 AM
A very lovely sonnet my dear friend, Sandra. I'm sure this will do well in the contest. I love it and enjoyed! Thank you so much for sharing and best wishes in the contest! May I also greet you a Merry Christmas to you and your family! Big Christmas hugs from me, Leonora
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December 26, 2015 at 8:32 PM
Thank you so much, Leonora. I hope your Christmas Day was Blessed and Merry. Hugs, Sandra
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December 20, 2015 at 11:56 PM
I know it's good when I finish reading a poem and a warm smile comes. Splendid write
Haight Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 8:40 AM
Hi Mark, thank you so much for stopping by with your uplifting and supportive comment! Sandra
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