Beata Agustin Poet Limerick

Birthday Icecream Cake

Special child enjoyed blest* birthday treat
delighted with pastries richly sweet…
oh, ice cream cake was best
he licked and bit midst zest
then shared for feast, saved from candle’s heat.

*Psalm 89:52 Blessed be the LORD for evermore. Amen...
 
June 17, 2023
4th place, "Ice Cream Limerick" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 7/22/2023.

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Paula Goldsmith July 23, 2023 at 1:52 PM Congratulations on your win. Your "BIRTHDAY ICE CREAM CAKE" is a fun/creative write. It makes a birthday extra special. Have a great day/week.......................

Sara Kendrick July 23, 2023 at 12:26 PM Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara

Tania Kitchin July 23, 2023 at 4:50 AM Beata, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet limerick!

Kim Merryman July 22, 2023 at 7:08 PM A sweet limerick, Beata! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Daisy Meadows July 18, 2023 at 12:03 AM Sounds delicious. A good birthday poem. Well done.