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Birthday Icecream Cake

Special child enjoyed blest* birthday treat delighted with pastries richly sweet… oh, ice cream cake was best he licked and bit midst zest then shared for feast, saved from candle’s heat.
*Psalm 89:52 Blessed be the LORD for evermore. Amen... June 17, 2023 4th place, "Ice Cream Limerick" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 7/22/2023.

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Date: 7/23/2023 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "BIRTHDAY ICE CREAM CAKE" is a fun/creative write. It makes a birthday extra special. Have a great day/week.......................
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Date: 7/23/2023 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara
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Date: 7/23/2023 4:50:00 AM
Beata, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet limerick!
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Date: 7/22/2023 7:08:00 PM
A sweet limerick, Beata! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/18/2023 12:03:00 AM
Sounds delicious. A good birthday poem. Well done.
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