Birthday Cake Waiting For Someone

Birthday cake,

sitting in bake shop

waiting for someone

to take them home

and make some

little child very happy.


written 6-2-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 5:32 PM
thankxx James for enjoying my romantic escapade with Fervor.. today would be my J.J.'s 20th birthday luv.. how ironic the cat died a day before .
Horne Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 9:12 AM
Lovely tender write, James. I remember the birthday cakes my gran used to make for me - very special : )
Sweetheart Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 8:43 AM
we have had many instances with this write u pose James ..the cake shop is down the street from our home .. passing it each day brings your words to mind luv..
Dufresne Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 4:48 AM
A wonderful ability to see a chapter to a story in all you see, James. nice poem. Thank you for your comment on RFD
Foulk Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 5:23 PM
thank you for reading and commenting on this poem and your welcome.
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 9:59 PM
WEll, you go put MY name on it and send it to me. hahaha. Cute!!
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June 6, 2011 at 2:10 PM
A birthday cake can be the highlight for a child on this special day! Their little faces light up as brightly as the candles. :) A kind and gentle write, James. Thanks so much for sharing!! Best wishes to you and yours, Mikki
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June 7, 2011 at 5:45 PM
thank you for reading and commenting on this poem.
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June 6, 2011 at 10:32 AM
Delightful, James. People can't seem to understand why I still want a birthday cake. Sometimes I just make my own. I can see that happy child enjoying his treat! Love, Carolyn
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