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Birth of a Butterfly

I struggle and strive
I pump persevering flow  
I knew I could fly

© Brenda V Northeast 18th may 2012
For Gail Doyles- Inspirational contest

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Elizabeth Wesley

March 17, 2013 at 3:22 PM

gorgeous verse taking the reader from struggle to victory. Who would think something so fragile could beat the odds? Wonderful thought in this Bren, Love, Lizzie

Debbie Duncan

August 22, 2012 at 3:13 PM

I do love the haiku and butterflies,,,,, nice ;}

Sara Kendrick

May 18, 2012 at 5:38 PM

Good to know that you say I knew I could fly..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by, reading and taking the time to comment on my work..Sara