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Birth of a butterfly

I struggle and strive I pump persevering flow I knew I could fly © Brenda V Northeast 18th may 2012 For Gail Doyles- Inspirational contest

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Date: 3/17/2013 3:22:00 PM
gorgeous verse taking the reader from struggle to victory. Who would think something so fragile could beat the odds? Wonderful thought in this Bren, Love, Lizzie
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Date: 8/22/2012 3:13:00 PM
I do love the haiku and butterflies,,,,, nice ;}
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:38:00 PM
Good to know that you say I knew I could fly..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by, reading and taking the time to comment on my work..Sara
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Date: 5/18/2012 3:40:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku!!!! <3 Always, Laura
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Date: 5/18/2012 2:22:00 PM
I always wondered who would solve the problem. Happy flying.. LOve, daver
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Date: 5/18/2012 8:43:00 AM
Hey this so good, what a wonderful way to describe the birth of a butterfly. awesome. harry
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Date: 5/18/2012 4:07:00 AM
uplifting the soul to new heights, brenda... best wishes and huggs! :)
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 5/18/2012 4:16:00 AM
Thank you Nette : )
Date: 5/18/2012 1:40:00 AM
Brenda very creative write..David
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 5/18/2012 4:01:00 AM
Thank you David : )