Birth Day

painful contractions 
blood bath path to mom and dad
happy birth day babe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Buhagiar Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 2:02 AM
Happy Birthday to the newly born. Hugs.
Jones Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 5:24 AM
My son is not newborn but I used my experience as a mom to write this. Most of my poems are written with some references to life and a healthy imagination. My son is a lesser known soup poet. I wrote about him in the acrostic Tahj. :0)
Wolf Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 6:51 PM
What was the baby named? -- Bloody Mary?! ~ Gershon
Jones Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 6:55 PM
lol you are funny! I named MY son Tahj Micah Jones. lol And it took 32 stitches to sew me up!!!! lol tmi?
Rodgers Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 7:25 AM
Dear Karen, Ahhh, so graphic and yet so sweet! Happy Birth Day! to your new born son. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Jones Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 8:57 AM
Oh no my son is not a newborn Daniel! He is a lesser known poet here on soup named Tahj Jones! Thanks for the wishes though!
Empress Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 6:25 AM
Is it your birthday? Its also one of my friends birthday. Sending you light today and always dear poetic kind soul! May your days be filled with positivity and creativity along with good health and good thoughts.
Jones Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 8:56 AM
His name is Tahj Jones and thanks Inky!
Empress Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 7:38 AM
Ah technically it is also your givin birth day. Hah i had the same experience i had my mom during delivery as i gave birth earlier than expected and my son’s birth month is June: i wish your son a very happy birthday, i forgot his name here on soup . Send him my wishes please
Jones Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 6:35 AM
Aw thanks Inky! It’s not my birthday but I was reflecting on the birth of my son this July. Only his dad wasn’t there. But God blessed me with an all female delivery room from doctor to nurse’s anesthesiologist and my mom!
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