Birth

Birth Brings joy Along with Complete fatigue You are filled with wonder By this new life you created As you hold your precious child in your arms Your eyes fill-up with tears, because you have been blessed With God's amazing gift of motherhood You sing a lullaby so sweet And slumber peacefully Your lives were changed At the time You gave Birth

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2015 12:01:00 PM

- Hey Mary :) - A lovely time to start in an poetry club, autumn and winter is a time we spend a lot of time inside our homes - More time to read and write poetry - I wish you an enjoyable time and warm welcome :) -Thanks for your great first poem - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mary Swingler
Date: 11/17/2015 12:35:00 PM

Thank you for your warm greeting. Autumn is my favorite season. I appreciate your encouraging thoughts.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/16/2015 11:22:00 PM

Hi, Mary, a lovely and sweet etheree. I like the double verse here. WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Mary Swingler
Date: 11/17/2015 12:37:00 PM

What a thoughtful and encouraging message. Your your kindness is a blessing.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/16/2015 7:07:00 PM

Hi Mary, this is such an excellent first piece - a beautiful Etheree! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/17/2015 12:29:00 PM

You are most welcome, Mary, and I will be happy to comment accordingly as we go along! Have a lovely day! Pandita

Mary Swingler
Date: 11/16/2015 9:01:00 PM

I appreciate your encouraging comments. I would welcome specific details of what needs work, what are weaknesses I need to improve . Thank you for your generous thoughts.