Mary Swingler Poet Etheree

Birth

Birth
Brings joy
Along with
Complete fatigue
You are filled with wonder
By this new life you created
As you hold your precious child in your arms
Your eyes fill-up with tears, because you have been blessed
With God's amazing gift of motherhood
You sing a lullaby so sweet
And slumber peacefully
Your lives were changed
At the time
You gave
Birth

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Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2015 at 12:01 PM - Hey Mary :) - A lovely time to start in an poetry club, autumn and winter is a time we spend a lot of time inside our homes - More time to read and write poetry - I wish you an enjoyable time and warm welcome :) -Thanks for your great first poem - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Mary Swingler November 17, 2015 at 12:35 PM Thank you for your warm greeting. Autumn is my favorite season. I appreciate your encouraging thoughts.

Poet Destroyer A November 16, 2015 at 11:22 PM Hi, Mary, a lovely and sweet etheree. I like the double verse here. WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Mary Swingler November 17, 2015 at 12:37 PM What a thoughtful and encouraging message. Your your kindness is a blessing.

Pandita Sietesantos November 16, 2015 at 7:07 PM Hi Mary, this is such an excellent first piece - a beautiful Etheree! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita Pandita Sietesantos November 17, 2015 at 12:29 PM You are most welcome, Mary, and I will be happy to comment accordingly as we go along! Have a lovely day! Pandita Mary Swingler November 16, 2015 at 9:01 PM I appreciate your encouraging comments. I would welcome specific details of what needs work, what are weaknesses I need to improve . Thank you for your generous thoughts.