Birkenhead

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Just a  fictional rhymed  poem. lol

Let me tell you a little story, of a boy called Ned He was they say from a far away place called, Birkenhead He had some good friends called: Fred, Red and also Ted And they were so poor, they didn't even own a bed! Ned loved his small town even when he was so bored Who can blame him,the town was so creepy,it was almost dead There wasn't a single park where after school to have fled Not even a library where a single book was to be had and read. Sure it wasn't much joy or fun at all, for him to spread Not even toasted peanut-butter and jellied bread Most of the time he had to sleep in a barn or the shed With all the fleas,horses,cows and the sheep in the stead. Every morning poor Ned woke up with a stiff and sorehead He just wanted to be well-read and well-bred But he didn't know a book how to read So he went around stutter...rrr..ring and feeling like a total Pinhead. So one day Ned decided some for himself and made a pled To leave right away his much beloved and well known homestead And take also with him his dear friends,Fred,Red and Ted To a much better and happier place so they went instead to West Quoddy Head! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 September,28,2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/29/2014 7:25:00 PM
Dorian what a lovely little story you have written here, absolutely enjoyed it, thank you so much for sharing it with us, take care my dear and have a good day.............Vera........
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Date: 9/29/2014 8:23:00 PM
Thank you Vera for your kind comment! You're so sweet! Take good care of yourself now, my friend. okay. Hugs and God bless you always! Love and light! :) XxxxD.
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