Birdwatcher, Sidetracked

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From my wheel chair facing their veranda
I could not distinguish the girl next door.
She looked somewhat like my niece, Miranda,
except for her hair halfway to the floor. 
(Miranda always kept her hair shorter.)

I turned the music down so I could hear
the conversation that was taking place.
Although I consider myself a seer
who reads expressions on a person’s face,
I discerned the voice of a reporter -

well-known correspondent on radio.
She posed some questions, most of which I missed.
Once she turned her head towards me, just so
and I caught one, clearly getting her gist.
“Is your neighbor watching us from her deck?”

Taking the hint, I retreated inside,
unaware of how obvious I’d been.
It was then I saw what she had descried. 
Eavesdropping had not caused her chagrin,
‘twas the field glasses hanging ‘round my neck.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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June 21, 2017 at 11:19 AM
Well done, Reason--CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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June 21, 2017 at 7:33 PM
I thank you, Janice, for the sweet commment.
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June 21, 2017 at 1:44 AM
Very funny. Congratulations, Kai
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June 23, 2017 at 1:00 PM
Thanks, Kai Michael, appreciate the read
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June 21, 2017 at 12:41 AM
I like your style. Congrats and thanks for supporting my contest.
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June 21, 2017 at 7:32 PM
thanks, Rob, for the honor of a placement in your contest on a word unused heretofore in my vocabulary. I appreciate your support.
Allison Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 12:44 PM
I love the twist in the story reason the ending get was most unexpected and I like the humour:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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May 9, 2017 at 6:41 PM
thanks, Jan, I appreciate your comment very much. And good luck to you, I will scan your list for a possible entry.
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