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Birdwatcher, Sidetracked

quintain From my wheel chair facing their veranda I could not distinguish the girl next door. She looked somewhat like my niece, Miranda, except for her hair halfway to the floor. (Miranda always kept her hair shorter.) I turned the music down so I could hear the conversation that was taking place. Although I consider myself a seer who reads expressions on a person’s face, I discerned the voice of a reporter - well-known correspondent on radio. She posed some questions, most of which I missed. Once she turned her head towards me, just so and I caught one, clearly getting her gist. “Is your neighbor watching us from her deck?” Taking the hint, I retreated inside, unaware of how obvious I’d been. It was then I saw what she had descried. Eavesdropping had not caused her chagrin, ‘twas the field glasses hanging ‘round my neck.

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Date: 6/21/2017 11:19:00 AM
Well done, Reason--CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Date: 6/21/2017 7:33:00 PM
I thank you, Janice, for the sweet commment.
Date: 6/21/2017 1:44:00 AM
Very funny. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 6/23/2017 1:00:00 PM
Thanks, Kai Michael, appreciate the read
Date: 6/21/2017 12:41:00 AM
I like your style. Congrats and thanks for supporting my contest.
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Date: 6/21/2017 7:32:00 PM
thanks, Rob, for the honor of a placement in your contest on a word unused heretofore in my vocabulary. I appreciate your support.
Date: 5/9/2017 12:44:00 PM
I love the twist in the story reason the ending get was most unexpected and I like the humour:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/9/2017 6:41:00 PM
thanks, Jan, I appreciate your comment very much. And good luck to you, I will scan your list for a possible entry.

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