Birdsongs

Early morning psalms, Praise the rising of the sun; Chatter of the birds.

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Kat Crane

Date: 5/10/2009 11:34:00 AM

I love listening to the birds in the morning; it's the best way to start the day. A lovely poem. Kat x

James Fraser

Date: 5/10/2009 1:06:00 AM

Raul, i love the chattering of the birds in the morning, its natures sign on telling us how good a day she is giving us. And she is rarely wrong. I think we should observe the wonderful creatures, they can tell us so much, before we eradicate them. Kool words my friend, James.

Date: 5/8/2009 2:07:00 PM

What a wonderful scene! Interesting interaction between faith and nature. You may want to change moning to morning in line one. Thank you for sharing this uplifting poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Have a great weekend! Karen

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/6/2009 1:32:00 PM

Raul awhile back my daughter came running in my mother in laws with a little bird that had nary a feather - We put a heating pad in a box and fed it wet dog food on the end of a steak knife - It now fills our home each morning with song - great haiku - God Bless Raul

Derrick Burton

Date: 5/6/2009 12:38:00 PM

smile..... wow! wasnt planning on writing anything but..... what the hell you inspired me. enjoyed reading this and have a great day.

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/6/2009 8:03:00 AM

Sooo lovely!! just a beautiful way to start the day!

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/6/2009 7:00:00 AM

It is indeed like a musical prayer to hear their morning song. So beautiful. Love, Shar

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/6/2009 5:16:00 AM

They are definately singing outside here this morning and what a lovely sound, so peaceful and comforting. I love to rise to that sound. Great job! Smiles from Lolita

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/6/2009 3:31:00 AM

Ahhh...like a breath of fresh sunshine. perfection for this 6am dawn. love, Kristin

Tyler Martin

Date: 5/6/2009 1:20:00 AM

Early morning praise, nice opening. Tyler