Birdseed

A trail of birdseed lies near a birdbath in my yard Little friends of every kind have come for the reward Not only are the birds singing… yes, you guessed, it’s true… Now their friends of every kind are there singing, too. It’s worked out rather well… As harmonious bliss gathers every day A most amazing thing…the squirrels are growing wings along the way I just can’t wait to see them take their… first ambling flight With a little practice and time, I’m sure they’ll be quite a sight. Soon the little bunnies will be nesting in the trees so… I think that on Arbor Day I’d best plant more trees I think God might be laughing or evolution is on the brink I call it Devine Intervention or perhaps him giving us a wink
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 4, 2012 at 6:16 AM
Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 173" Carol. Love, Carol
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May 1, 2012 at 2:55 PM
Congratulations on your HM Carol
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April 25, 2012 at 3:23 AM
I'm not sure how to comment to your previous comment to me ... so that you will actually see it... so I'm trying this avenue... I was quite flattered by your request... I am not sure what has 'inspired' you in 'passing trains...', but I have no problem if you use the 'form', if it helps you better express your own fellings, thoughts, desires, ... Now I have reread some of your poems (including 'birdseed') I don't really think that I can inspire you more than you already are... Terry
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April 24, 2012 at 12:59 PM
This was a very short poem. Did it take long to write?... ;-D Terry
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April 24, 2012 at 1:26 PM
Oh! That's better... Glad I came back for a second look... This version's much better... I like it... Terry
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