Birds Told Us the Time

Four black birds sitting in a row.
Came to tell us it was her time to go.

Grandmom had seen them sitting on the line.
And wondered what their purpose was at the time.

She came to the waiting room and said that four birds
Kept flying to her with chirping messages their words.

They flew to her four times, each one trying to speak.
And all this time our loved one was growing very weak.

Slowly the clock made it to four.
And we were all sitting there watching the door.

We finally heard footsteps coming across the floor.
And the doctor told us our loved one had left us at four!

We then knew that these four birds had been sent
To tell us of our loved one's going before she went.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 9:55 PM
Nce couplets and an interesting write
Johnson Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 9:44 AM
i have a story like that from my childhood. You told it well. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 7:09 AM
Congrats Marty on your winning poem in Debbie's contest.. a sad story full of emotion precluding the loved one's death .. told so eloquently in your couplet lines.. enjoy your special and touching win..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Trevino Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 5:04 PM
those four birds each must of represented an hour... am i correct?... very nice poem Marty, enjoyed
A   Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 2:13 PM
I will give you my input on this . Hope you do not get mad . if four birds came to.......s.m.
Kendrick Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 2:01 PM
Great expressive and emotive write.. Sorry to hear of your loss...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Guzzi Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 1:23 PM
yes nature is full of knowledge a very powerful verse! Light & Love
Culverhouse Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 1:07 PM
creepy, signs of passage.
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