birds of spring

Blue skies where geese fly yellow ducklings parading Duck dad on patrol

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/2/2025 7:05:00 PM

Karen, you sound like a bird watcher! It is all amazing....every little aspect of what goes on simply astounds and your poem just brings it all to light through examples! Smiles!

Karen Jones
Date: 4/3/2025 12:29:00 AM

I am but it’s even more fun to note the birds watch me! There is a specific window by my bed and they often fly over to the low end of the roof and peek at me! Smiles I love your comments thanks Duke!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/30/2025 7:26:00 PM

Ha, ha! I love what my mind does with your phrase 'Duck Dad.' I picture him with a yellow construction helmet, a fierce scowl on his duckbill, and an exaggerated-leaning-forward-aggressive gait. ~ Donald

Karen Jones
Date: 3/30/2025 7:43:00 PM

Lol

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 3/30/2025 6:27:00 PM

Beautiful picture with your Haiku Karen. Good luck in the contest

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 3/30/2025 7:10:00 PM

It is. I submitted one as well but I feel like you do about my chances as well.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/30/2025 7:08:00 PM

Thanks Oliver! Competition is steep I don’t expect to place lol