birds of spring

Blue skies where geese fly
yellow ducklings parading
Duck dad on patrol
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Beaufort Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 7:05 PM
Karen, you sound like a bird watcher! It is all amazing....every little aspect of what goes on simply astounds and your poem just brings it all to light through examples! Smiles!
Jones Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 12:29 AM
I am but it’s even more fun to note the birds watch me! There is a specific window by my bed and they often fly over to the low end of the roof and peek at me! Smiles I love your comments thanks Duke!
Wolf Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 7:26 PM
Ha, ha! I love what my mind does with your phrase 'Duck Dad.' I picture him with a yellow construction helmet, a fierce scowl on his duckbill, and an exaggerated-leaning-forward-aggressive gait. ~ Donald
Jones Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 7:43 PM
Lol
Mckeithan Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 6:27 PM
Beautiful picture with your Haiku Karen. Good luck in the contest
Mckeithan Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 7:10 PM
It is. I submitted one as well but I feel like you do about my chances as well.
Jones Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 7:08 PM
Thanks Oliver! Competition is steep I don’t expect to place lol
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