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SPRING FEVER!

Birds of Paradise

gray days are make believe, with a scintilla of birdsong, almost annoying in its tease, like a chimerical haze. hope remembers the sun, its shining rays, elaborate feathers, and paradisiacal dance. green moss, creeping ivy, budding oaks, streamers of newborn pink willow, stunning blue eyes of paradise these Winter bones ache... 2/9/2018 Brian Strand’s 2018 Standard Contest
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Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 11:13 PM
Congratulations, Kim on your great win. Nature at its best.
Raynes Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 6:51 PM
congratulations Kim, such a nice easy flowing read, well deserved first place
Gauthier Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 2:03 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Kim.
Cunningham Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 1:32 PM
A well deserved win Kim Congratulations Regard Tom
Payton Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Lovely and clever, Bravo Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:40 AM
Thank you!
Gauthier Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 6:18 PM
Most pleasant read, Kim. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Thanks, Line!
Cook Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Love this poem :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Thank you, Tom!
One Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 8:49 AM
wonderful imagery, and some great use of words, especially the third stanza.. well written Kim...
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 9:25 AM
Thanks so much, Silent!
Michael Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 8:24 AM
You made me smile,"these Winter bones ache..." Lovely little poem...All the best
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 9:26 AM
:) Thanks, Arturo!
Sands Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Great one Kim! I hope Spring comes early this year :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 7:49 AM
I’m ready!
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