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SPRING FEVER!

gray days are make believe, with a scintilla of birdsong, almost annoying in its tease, like a chimerical haze. hope remembers the sun, its shining rays, elaborate feathers, and paradisiacal dance. green moss, creeping ivy, budding oaks, streamers of newborn pink willow, stunning blue eyes of paradise these Winter bones ache... 2/9/2018 Brian Strand’s 2018 Standard Contest

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Date: 2/12/2018 11:13:00 PM
Congratulations, Kim on your great win. Nature at its best.
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Date: 2/12/2018 6:51:00 PM
congratulations Kim, such a nice easy flowing read, well deserved first place
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Date: 2/12/2018 2:03:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Kim.
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Date: 2/12/2018 1:32:00 PM
A well deserved win Kim Congratulations Regard Tom
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Date: 2/10/2018 5:44:00 AM
Lovely and clever, Bravo Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/10/2018 9:40:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/9/2018 6:18:00 PM
Most pleasant read, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2018 6:20:00 PM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 2/9/2018 4:04:00 PM
Love this poem :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2018 6:20:00 PM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 2/9/2018 8:49:00 AM
wonderful imagery, and some great use of words, especially the third stanza.. well written Kim...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2018 9:25:00 AM
Thanks so much, Silent!
Date: 2/9/2018 8:24:00 AM
You made me smile,"these Winter bones ache..." Lovely little poem...All the best
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2018 9:26:00 AM
:) Thanks, Arturo!
Date: 2/9/2018 7:45:00 AM
Great one Kim! I hope Spring comes early this year :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2018 7:49:00 AM
I’m ready!

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