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Bird Series #1

      
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Bird's Love Song Series I


Eternal love is considerate, in its presence ~ gliders grace with elegance—Poet All true and deep love is a sacrifice—Carl Jung
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As winter’s snow drifts upon the meadows I await the thaw, * and the caw of the cockatoo perched on the magnolia tree branch White icy avalanche melting, * nourishing the soil ‘neath the brittle bush * As the first cherry blossom blooms An umbra of blushing pink A white parrot whistles his tunes Spring dissipates dark ink laden clouds Left behind are the remnants of snow squall shrouds, * * Fall's * cascading eminence * A new moon dawns To defy autumnal of March would be to deny the swans of their elegant arch Of their everlasting love for each other, fidelities peace As peaceful as the dove, As loyal as geese * They roam, lead bird navigator, social dominance his experience Holds sway as an avian aviator Riverboat pilot steering the helm Like the migratory birds with no homes find comfort on the majestic elm In serene and bluest of skies flocks fly in V forms * Trailing birds ride an updraft effortlessly glide along the breeze While other birds fly aimlessly Swanning over the hillside with ease * Gliding above the oceanside are the seagulls without any destination Robins let their tails just brush the ground To spat isn’t the mountain quail’s thing Just charming chit chat * Or a love song he’ll sing The parrot in the cherry blossom tree Elegant, considerate feathered friend so free The whole world belongs to you In warmer weathered early Spring
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Beaufort Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 1:28 PM
Anaya, your quote by Jung makes me think...we do have to take the spotlight off of ourselves when we love another person. Sacrifices come with great dividends. Your poem mentions several species of birds with different behaviors. They are all remarkable creatures and they are amazing to watch. You obviously enjoy them. They have the privilege of flying, which is an incredible means of travel. It's something we can dream about ...even flying an aircraft brings us near...buy not exactly there.
Anaya Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 11:24 AM
They sing a lovebird's song, and fly where love learns no more. Lol, it is an incredible means of travel, to me a strong wind guiding me down the foothills of the long twisting canyon I've hiked many times, it felt like I was flying, true story. Swans be the symbol of love and part of my series of bird journals.
Gorelick Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 9:32 AM
I took your lovely avian tribute to heart. There is no more welcoming sign of love on display as the sound and sight of birds cheerfully chirping outside my window, serenading me awake on a bright spring morning. Well-done, Anaya
Anaya Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 10:26 AM
Beautifully said, Robert! Ty, I appreciate your kind words and support. Lenten Season blessings! ~
Goldsmith Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 10:42 AM
What a lovely "Bird's Love Song" write you have here. Love your bird picture with a heart. They sure look in love. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Anaya Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 11:33 AM
I just added birds chirping for Spring ambience. Ty so much for your presence and comment, Paula! ~have a nice day
Rodgers Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 6:10 AM
Dear Anaya, O' how your opening stanza beautifully and wonderfully capture the anticipation of spring's arrival, with the cockatoo's caw heralding the coming change. I loved the image of the "White icy avalanche melting" nourishing the soil beneath the brittle bush which is a powerful metaphor for the cycle of death and rebirth in nature. Anaya, such a beautiful affirmation of freedom and the boundless possibilities that spring represents. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Anaya Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 10:36 AM
Daniel, I used avalanche because climate change has attributed to what may seem like a precarious state of our snowpacks and like you said, cycle of death and rebirth, was what I was intending to convey (I'm working on my metaphors) thanks for your help, always. Spring blessings to you, poet ~
Daniel Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 10:48 PM
Brilliant in its birdie love, Anaya:)
Anaya Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 10:37 AM
Thank you so much, sweet poetess! I think your avatar is a violet backed starling.
Anaya Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 7:20 PM
Ash Wednsday blessings
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