Notes About The Poem

Birds In the Eventide

So
Serene
Swell, softly
Swallows sweetly
Sing

Spring
Sunset
Scarlet sky
Sublime starlings
Soar


Light Up The Page 2 Poetry Contest j
Sponsored by: Joseph May (Winner : 2nd Place)
Date written and posted: 03/10/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 5:56 PM
Love the letter you chose to use. Works so well with sublime starlings. Congrats on the win, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 9:51 PM
Thank you, Andrea!:-) Most appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 8:25 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 2:01 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!:-)
May Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 6:09 PM
The sweet song of swallows...Congrats on your win Edward
Ibeh Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 8:17 PM
Thanks so much for my placement, Joe:-)
Gorelick Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 5:16 PM
Beautifully done. BG
Ibeh Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, Barbara!:-)
Kitchin Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 4:26 PM
Love this Ed! Good luck in the contest!
Ibeh Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, Tania!:-)
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 8:27 AM
- So beautiful they soar, Edward :) - GL - // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 6:50 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!:-)
Sands Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 5:35 PM
Beautifully written ! :)
Ibeh Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 5:49 PM
Thank you, Heidi!:-)
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