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Birds In Cage

Heartless are those who keep pets in a cage If they're kept in cage maybe they will feel I am sure they will be sad, full of rage Then they will understand the bird's ordeal If they're kept in cage maybe they will feel No freedom, loneliness, no space to move Then they will understand the birds ordeal Bird's freedom they will then surely approve No freedom, loneliness, no space to move I am sure they will be sad, full of rage Bird's freedom they will then surely approve Heartless are those who keep pets in a cage 12.06.2021 For Eve Roper pantoum contest Picture chosen 2 Rhymes checked at Rhymezone Syllables count checked at HMS

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/12/2021 11:09:00 AM

Hello Rama, I agree that the birds should be free. i believe that no bird should be in a cage. Blessings my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/13/2021 11:27:00 AM

Hello Rama, I agree. Blessing my friend.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 6/12/2021 11:13:00 AM

Our thoughts match. Wish I could put bird owner's in cage and make them understand... Take care, God bless!