Rama Balasubramanian Poet Pantoum

Birds In Cage

Heartless are those who keep pets in a cage
If they're kept in cage maybe they will feel
I am sure they will be sad, full of rage
Then they will understand the bird's ordeal

If they're kept in cage maybe they will feel
No freedom, loneliness, no space to move
Then they will understand the birds ordeal
Bird's freedom they will then surely approve

No freedom, loneliness, no space to move
I am sure they will be sad, full of rage
Bird's freedom they will then surely approve
Heartless are those who keep pets in a cage

12.06.2021
For Eve Roper pantoum contest
Picture chosen 2
Rhymes checked at Rhymezone
Syllables count checked at HMS

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Darlene De Beaulieu June 12, 2021 at 11:09 AM Hello Rama, I agree that the birds should be free. i believe that no bird should be in a cage. Blessings my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu June 13, 2021 at 11:27 AM Hello Rama, I agree. Blessing my friend. Rama Balasubramanian June 12, 2021 at 11:13 AM Our thoughts match. Wish I could put bird owner's in cage and make them understand... Take care, God bless!