Birds Flying

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Poetry/Sestet Rhyme ababcc/Birds Flying
Copyright Protected, 06-1737-244-06
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, June 06, 2025
For the International Contest, Bite Size Poem No 114
Sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 06/12/2025

~ BEAUTIFUL ~

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I saw birds flying in an arrow shape,
perfect alignment except for one,
making an escape . . .  
imagined him chirping forget it-  I am done,
as he flew away without looking back,
into the blue sky just a speck black.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/6/2025 12:16:00 PM

- ... and gone it was :) - Great written, Constance :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Constance La France
Date: 6/10/2025 3:40:00 PM

Anne-Lise, thank you for the comment and compliment, appreciate ~