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Bird's Eye View

majestic red kite
darting steely eyes seek prey
look ... no strings attached

02/04/20

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Line Gauthier

February 18, 2020 at 8:18 PM

Love this, Jan.

Quoth Theraven

February 10, 2020 at 10:42 PM

Jan, Lovely flight in this Haiku's kite. -Richard

Eve Roper

February 8, 2020 at 7:55 AM

I love this one. Your humor really amazes me, Roper was just like you... and I don't have one..

Andrea Dietrich

February 6, 2020 at 6:47 PM

very very good. One of your best, Jan

Carolyn Devonshire

February 6, 2020 at 2:31 PM

Wow, a great haiku, Jan! Very nice twist with "no strings attached." If for a contest, surely a winner. Hugs, Carolyn

Michelle Faulkner

February 6, 2020 at 1:29 PM

I love the eagles and hawks that soar over us, it inspires me to look up, this is lovely, Jan-

Heidi Sands

February 5, 2020 at 5:54 PM

Oh, I love this one. I am happy I was led to it. Fly free Jan. So nice :)

Gershon Wolf

February 5, 2020 at 1:14 PM

Bird can be grateful that you didn't write 'no wings detached!'... Well, your idea is much funnier/cuter anyway. Nice haiku, Jan!

Rico Leffanta

February 5, 2020 at 12:32 PM

I missed the kite and string connection as I thought your last line referred to the tethered birds or prey! Well done! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison

February 5, 2020 at 4:44 PM

I wanted to leave the final line open to interpretation rico:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

February 5, 2020 at 12:00 PM

Ooh, he's in trouble...good visual.

Jan Allison

February 5, 2020 at 4:42 PM

Thanks ML:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

February 5, 2020 at 9:52 AM

I see it effortlessly, Jan. I would not want to be a mouse with him overhead!

Jan Allison

February 5, 2020 at 10:36 AM

Glad you liked it DT:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 5, 2020 at 4:44 AM

- Majestic is the right word for your haiku, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

February 5, 2020 at 10:35 AM

Thanks Anne--Lise :-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

February 4, 2020 at 4:49 PM

Ah the. Ultimate kite

Jan Allison

February 5, 2020 at 10:31 AM

Exactly John, they are a joy to see high in the sky:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 4, 2020 at 4:49 PM

I love it Jan! A fave :))) xomo

Jan Allison

February 5, 2020 at 10:33 AM

Thanks so much Mo, not sure if it should be classed as a haiku with the final line but I had to use it:-) hugs Jan xx

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