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majestic red kite darting steely eyes seek prey look ... no strings attached 02/04/20

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Date: 2/18/2020 8:18:00 PM
Love this, Jan.
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Date: 2/10/2020 10:42:00 PM
Jan, Lovely flight in this Haiku's kite. -Richard
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Date: 2/8/2020 7:55:00 AM
I love this one. Your humor really amazes me, Roper was just like you... and I don't have one..
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Date: 2/6/2020 6:47:00 PM
very very good. One of your best, Jan
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Date: 2/6/2020 2:31:00 PM
Wow, a great haiku, Jan! Very nice twist with "no strings attached." If for a contest, surely a winner. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/6/2020 1:29:00 PM
I love the eagles and hawks that soar over us, it inspires me to look up, this is lovely, Jan-
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Date: 2/5/2020 5:54:00 PM
Oh, I love this one. I am happy I was led to it. Fly free Jan. So nice :)
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Date: 2/5/2020 1:14:00 PM
Bird can be grateful that you didn't write 'no wings detached!'... Well, your idea is much funnier/cuter anyway. Nice haiku, Jan!
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Date: 2/5/2020 12:32:00 PM
I missed the kite and string connection as I thought your last line referred to the tethered birds or prey! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 2/5/2020 4:44:00 PM
I wanted to leave the final line open to interpretation rico:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/5/2020 12:00:00 PM
Ooh, he's in trouble...good visual.
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Date: 2/5/2020 4:42:00 PM
Thanks ML:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/5/2020 4:44:00 AM
- Majestic is the right word for your haiku, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/5/2020 10:35:00 AM
Thanks Anne--Lise :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/4/2020 4:49:00 PM
I love it Jan! A fave :))) xomo
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Date: 2/5/2020 10:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Mo, not sure if it should be classed as a haiku with the final line but I had to use it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/4/2020 4:49:00 PM
Ah the. Ultimate kite
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Date: 2/5/2020 10:31:00 AM
Exactly John, they are a joy to see high in the sky:-) hugs Jan xx