Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Birds Drop By the Thousands

When someone suddenly widens their eyes
Did they fart or have they just been surprised
If all of a sudden
Flowers become sullen
And birds drop by the thousands from the skies

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Laura Breidenthal April 1, 2018 at 1:55 AM What a visual! I hope you are doing well my friend, that the weekend is treating you well. (: Always, Laura Jack Ellison April 1, 2018 at 8:39 AM My weekends always treat me well along with the other five days!!! Positive outlook??? XOX

Tom Cunningham March 31, 2018 at 9:23 AM But does it make your eyes water. Jack Ellison March 31, 2018 at 9:31 AM Uh, that's farting"!!! Jack Ellison March 31, 2018 at 9:29 AM Faering does! Must be careful... be sure it's JUST a fart!!!

Silent One March 31, 2018 at 8:22 AM This is a bit sad this on Jack... Jack Ellison March 31, 2018 at 9:02 AM I know, I know... sorry my friend!!! Have a great Easter dear friend!!!